[Gmp-commit] /var/hg/gmp: Improve wording.

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details:   /var/hg/gmp/rev/ba0bde86d614
changeset: 16905:ba0bde86d614
user:      Torbjorn Granlund <torbjorng at google.com>
date:      Mon Oct 26 21:56:06 2015 +0100
description:
Improve wording.

diffstat:

 NEWS |  12 ++++++------
 1 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

diffs (23 lines):

diff -r e946eadb6dc3 -r ba0bde86d614 NEWS
--- a/NEWS	Mon Oct 26 16:27:35 2015 +0100
+++ b/NEWS	Mon Oct 26 21:56:06 2015 +0100
@@ -44,13 +44,13 @@
 
   * Support for more 32-bit arm processors.
 
-  * Support compilation with clang/llvm for more platforms.  Caution: GMP
-    triggers mis-compilation bugs in clang for many platforms, such as arm,
-    x86 (32-bit and 64-bit), powerpc, mips.
+  * Support for compilation with clang/llvm on more platforms.  Caution: GMP
+    triggers mis-compilation bugs in clang for many platforms, such as arm, x86
+    (32-bit and 64-bit), powerpc, mips.
 
-  * Support for AVX-less modern x86 CPUs, either because the CPU vendor chose
-    to disable AVX, or because the running kernel lacks AVX context switch
-    support.
+  * Support for AVX-less modern x86 CPUs. (Such support might be missing either
+    because the CPU vendor chose to disable AVX, or because the running kernel
+    lacks AVX context switch support.)
 
   * Stack usage trimmed; we believe 512 KiB is now sufficient for any GMP
     call, irrespective of operand size.